Magazine Advert

This is the first draft of my magazine advert, I again made it using Adobe Photoshop CS3 editing software which I have made significant improvements on, I am now able to express myself with more creative freedom due to my advances using the software over a number of weeks. I used the same image as I had used for the cover of my digipak in order to retain a sense of continuity and brand identity, so that the band are identifiable to the target demographic. The image was inspired by the cover of Ed Sheeran's "The A Team" - which I have referenced throughout my project and I cite Sheeran's minimalist approach to his work as a huge inspiration to my own. I liked the idea of the girl walking away from the camera alone encompassed in a large environment to make her look all the more isolated.
Although it seems incredibly peculiar and breaks all conventions of my products, I had always had the idea in the back of my mind (ever since I knew I would be using my younger sister as the lone protagonist in my video) that the digipak would bear some resemblance to Eminem's 2010 album "recovery" - it shows the artist walking into the distance within an environment of incredible magnitude in terms of size in order to connote isolation, in the case of Eminem's album it serves as an extended metaphor for the lonely journey he has taken  from drug addiction to sobriety which, although isn't the case in my video, still remains valid for my poster/advert/digipak. The metaphor in my product speaks much more about bullying towards young people and how the youth of today can often be made to feel alienated due to intense pressure thrust upon them by the media forcing them to fit into trends and keep up with the burgeoning developments in fashion, technology, media, social trends etc.

Despite the fact the genre completely contradicts that of the artist I am producing for I felt the image was suitable for my own product, which has meant me risking breaking some conventions by allowing a hip-hop/rap album to inform some of my product research and design it brings a sense of diversity and a more eclectic dimension to my product. I have also framed the protagonist in a similar fashion by deliberately not placing them directly in the centre of the screen, this connotes somewhat a lack of importance and also allows for a more central view of the vanishing point.

However, upon feedback from my teacher (who also analysed and helped me formulate a revised plan for my digipak) noticed that the poster (like my digipak) is actually more of a grey colour rather than black and white - which is the look that I intended to acheive. This meant that I would have to adjust levels and contrast on photoshop to make the image darker and more striking and less dull. it also meant me adapting the elements of chiaroscuro in the image to make it more iconic. Chiaroscuro is merely a photography term that refers to the composition/treatment of light and shade in a picture. I feel that I want the girl to become somewhat of an icon in my video and recognised for certain characteristics so that she literally becomes an icon. I want the protagonist to become a symbol through the way I portray her in the video and the way in which I use certain photos and editing techniques in my ancillary texts - which is why I have chosen to frame her on her own throughout my video and ancillary texts. This makes the girl a sign - a symbol almost which then goes someway to making her indexical: you see the girl and this signifies isolation, that isolation is a theme. This is the approach I've taken to supplement my editing and use semiotics to help convey ideas/codes and conventions to the audience. This may seem quite far fetched, but I believe with the right editing and by further developing my magazine poster I can create a very well improved, revised second draft for my magazine advert.

Another piece of teacher feedback I have to take into account is that he feels the stars on the poster are too big and over elaborate - he said that they draw the viewers attention away from the words "breathtaking" and "album of the year" which are important for the viewer to read when analysing the poster - this is the final change I will have to make for my magazine poster in order to get it to a respectable standard.

The Case - "The Fight": Second Draft (Second Shoot)

Above is the second cut of my video, I have made significant changes to it since my first cut and mainly just included a lot more footage than I had previously so that I can get a rough idea as to what my video is looking like. I have also included a time lapse in the video (02:04 - 02:10) which was inspired by the time lapse from the video "Sweet Child O' Mine" - I want to create a graphic match that will be recognisable to my target audience who (upon analysis of survey results) manifest a keen interest in this style of music and so will be able to relate to this intertextuality in the video and will hopefully gratify them as an audience. In order to film this time lapse, I had to stand in the field for fifteen minutes using a high angled shot in order to capture the sky and also include some of the field within the confines of the frame to capture the dramatic effect of the shadows (projected from the clouds) moving along the surface of the field to create a sense of pathetic fallacy within the video. I then had to import this footage into Premiere Pro and cut/trim the clip as I encountered some adversities when filming such as dog walkers and general pedestrians being included in the shot which was not what I wanted as this would ruin the dramatic effect I intended for my video. In addition to this, it was important that I retained the monochrome effect to maintain synergy between all the scenes in the video, as I originally wanted to include this as the only shot in the video to include colour, however, my teacher advised against this strongly and said that it would break the continuity of the video. After applying the monochrome effect to the clip I right clicked the footage and selected (Speed/Duration...) and then slowed the pace at which the clip is played - this is another way that my development on new media software/technologies allowed me more creative freedom in the constructive process of creating my product, meaning that I can be more incisive in the decisions I make and more direct when creating the video, rather than having to compromise due to a lack of proficiency on the software.

Depicted above is the process by which I was able to apply the effect of a 'time lapse' in my video, this gave the effect of the girl being insignificant, giving the impression that even as time moves on and the world advances, she is left behind and almost forgotten. Following this I then adjusted the pace/speed of the video accordingly as depicted below.

After I had applied this effect, I noticed that upon playback of the video the time lapse appeared very jumpy and lagged significantly (to my frustration) and I could not work out why. However, I then conducted some research into Premiere Pro and realised that my video needed to be rendered in order to give it a smoother playback.

By selecting "Render Entire Work Area" I was able to render the entire video which meant a green bar appeared above all the clips I had selected to be rendered in the Premiere work area, and this allowed for smoother transitions between shots and sequences and a smoother playback for my time lapse which now appears far more professional. I later found out that as a short cut, simply pressing the enter key on the MacBook allowed me to render the entire video.

Depicted above: the green bar that indicated that the footage had been rendered. This was important to check before exporting the footage as I wanted to make sure the quality of my second cut was good - this is also something I will have to pay close attention to before exporting my final cut as I will have to ensure that it is of the highest quality before it is moderated, ironing out any creases that may be present in the video.

The majority of my filming in the second shoot was done without the use of a tripod, as this is something I noticed was a commonality among some of the videos I have analysed ("Sweet Child O' Mine" being the most notable example) and it allowed me to capture the video with connotations that it was more of a 'documentary' than a music video, which certainly added to the verisimilitude of the second cut of the video. I have added almost a montage at the end of the video, a sequence of shots inter-cut with other more dramatic shots (girl ripping the paper and crying etc.) and I have done this in a way so that the cuts have been done in time with the beat of the drum or the guitar riff - this will help me establish a good relationship between the audio and the visuals (another convention I unearthed upon researching the subject) which will make the text easier to decode for the audience. In addition to this I have also included a shot that matches the audio: at 02:24, when the vocalist screams "I've got to run away" I have matched the audio and visuals together by including a rather dramatic shot of the girl running away (embodying the songs lyrics) in slow motion. I believe this coupled with some of the binary oppositions I have included in the video, such as the concept of the girl playing in the playground and swinging on the swing whilst manifesting a very pensive, depressed expression have allowed me to encode genuine meaning into my video in order to help me get more marks.

This is how I applied the black and white or 'monochrome' effect in the video, which has been used throughout the video to maintain a certain level of synergy in the video that will work well in conjunction with my ancillary texts.

Now it is merely a case of filling in the gaps, thinking of an effective ending (this is all teacher feedback) and making small tweaks to lighting and colour correcting the video before conducting a comprehensive and meticulous evaluation of the product.

Digipak Ideas

In order to further inform research for my digipak drafts, I have further analysed more digipaks/album covers from bands of a similar genre/similar design to what I would like to achieve. Note that the video was filmed in black and white when released to the UK, much like the digipak/album cover. This album cover is black with a shade of white that is almost beige, a sort of dark cream/ivory colour.

Ivory is considered quite a sophisticated colour that connotes a calmness and dignity, which my reflect what the band feel they would like to be considered as. Cream/Ivory essentially signify/connote purity and innocence - which for a start is a binary opposition because the meaning behind the song essentially "depicts the jealousy and paranoia of a man who suspects his significant other is cheating on him" - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mr._Brightside

This therefore establishes a clear binary opposition - using colours associated with purity and innocence, arguably warmth to represent a song about an unfaithful lover is done essentially to present two concepts with entirely different meanings that conflict each other in every way. This gives the artwork a sense of irony but also evokes an intriguing interest from consumers - it would be expected that a picture of a man and a woman who share an intimate relationship with each tother would be printed to maintain some relativity, however The Killers and/or their marketing team had clearly chosen to subvert this convention.

Another commonality between this and the other digipak i have analysed (Ed Sheeran's "The A Team") is that the name of the track is positioned very low in the bottom right hand corner of the cover in very basic (but still sophisticated) typography. Again, this can be attributed to the desire of achieving minimalism and to demonstrate a work ethic that focuses entirely on the production of the music. This is because many of the fans will never actually get to meet the band, but the artwork on album covers and promo videos resonates through to the fans and they subconsciously form an opinion of the band based on these factors. The image itself is actually quite difficult to decipher which renders it with some ambiguity: it seems that it is an archetypical American highway which could be symbolic for a number of things. It could be symbolic of life's complications and how it is an emotional roller coaster, especially in the context of the narrative and that we all face ramifications in life. However, it could also be to target an American demographic who will immediately recognise this style of road/highway and so it may be to grab the attention of their target audience.

Digipak Ideas

In order to help me construct an effective digipak I have researched into bands/songs that have produced similar videos to the type of video I would like to produce, therefore, I feel it is important to blog this progress to help me collate ideas and get a more vivid idea of what I would like my digipak to look like. Having composed a very rough first draft of my video, I understand that there has to be a clear correlation between my digipak and my video to give the artist credibility and to maintain continuity. I will be analyzing digipaks for texts that were either filmed or produced in black and white and that are somewhat similar musical styles to the artist I am producing for. I have produced a first draft of my digipak, however upon analyzing it more meticulously it seems there are some discrepancies between the content in the video and the pictures on the digipak.

Ed Sheeran - "The A Team" Artwork

The cover depicts the protagonist of the video walking with her back to the camera, which connotes a lack of identity, insignificance and hints at ambiguity. The composition of the cover also maintains relevance to the text: the black and white effect that the text was filmed in has been retained and making the the project as a whole more 'neat' which gives the artist more credibility but also gives the work itself an identity, a way in which it can be recognised - using more bright colours on the digipak may have confused fans as it would have been difficult to associate the digipak and the video. This is one of the early problems I encountered in my work - there was a clear discrepancy between what I had filmed and the artwork on the digipak - my first draft featured no photos of the protagonist and all photos of the locations in which I filmed were in colour. Also, the main feature of this digipak is the protagonist who takes up a large portion of space within the confines of the photo and has been sketched in a very dark shade of black - another interesting feature of the digipak and also the artist Ed Sheeran himself. Album covers that feature drawings/sketches have become somewhat of a trademark for Sheeran, as his album "+" features similar textures that look like very detailed sketches.

Depicted above is another example of Sheeran's album artwork, which feature photos that have been cleverly converted into pencil sketches via meticulous editing. The immediate effect of these detailed drawings is that it gives the artist an identity, a trademark by which he can be recognised - an artist or band must be recognised as a brand therefore my ancillary texts (digipak and poster) must be of a very similar style maintaining some distinct features to help get the band recognised. But back to the original cover for the A Team, it features small lettering rather than larger, lavish print which goes a long way in  reinforcing the artists intentions of focusing solely on making music rather than the more lucrative side of the industry, and promotes a healthy image for the artist with connotations that he is leaning towards a minimalist approach to his music. The small text coupled with simple typography goes even further to establish the artist's intentions to focus on the music itself rather than the lavish and luxurious production tools they have at their disposal which is another feature which denotes that Sheeran is a proponent of minimalism. The sketch effect that has been put on the A Team cover also bears similarities to other minimalist art:

The textures used in this sketch feature the bare essentials of the facial features and shading where appropriate, no water colours have been used and the sketch encapsulates the modern day minimalist sketch, this sketch is analogous with Sheeran's album cover which supports the argument that the artist (Sheeran) is striving for minimalism to gain respect from fans and other artists. Another notable feature of Sheeran's work is his logo; his name in typography that features a slightly 'fuzzy' rough-around-the-edges look coupled with a paw print - a symbol that has come to define him and his work in recent years. The paw print has become somewhat synonymous for Sheeran's work since his rise to success - stemming from a sticker used to adorn his acoustic guitar from way back to some of his first gigs that has remained with him today and allowed him to become a marketing machine - it is probably this that the fans respect him for, despite Sheeran's success he remembers where he came from and has remained down to earth still using what looks like a neglected acoustic guitar to perform at gigs with.

Above is Sheeran's acoustic guitar with the famous paw print that now serves as a symbol/representation of his work, used to decorate a seemingly neglected guitar which contributes to his indie image - as I have alluded to previously, many things in the indie genre are 'rough-around-the-edges" such as the camera work used in music videos and also clothing (ripped jeans etc.) and Sheeran has kept this trend going however he embodies this through his instruments. It may seem pedantic, but small it seems small details like this go a long way in producing a successful digipak that gives the artist a brand identity.

Depicted above is another example of how the logo has become a trademark of Ed Sheeran's work, it is one of the first things featured in bright white and bold on the famous 'Carry On' memes which have experienced exponential growth in recent years. In essence, the point is that a digipak needs a number of different features to give it credibility depending on the genre and the target audience/demographic, and a logo that the band can be recognised by is just as important as the digipak it is printed on, it gives the band/artist recognition. This meme has also been done in orange which is, again, synonymous for Sheeran's work.

The fact that the album cover is merely a sketch almost 'simplifies' it, as if it has taken merely pencil and paper to produce the cover (despite the fact it would have taken photos and adequate editing software to produce this look)- another reference to minimalism and also the typography in which the title has been produced - "The A Team" is written in a font that looks very basic and eroded, broken. This embodies many of the themes in the song/video: a sex worker who has very limited resources and has been broken by society, who is relying on bare essentials to get by and earn a living.

Logo Design and Developments/Drafts

I felt it is imperative in order to market the band as a brand to design possible logos in order to promote the band on my ancilliary texts and give them a brand identity, trying to keep the design somewhat simple and maybe adhere to conventions to prevent being ostentatious/pretentious which would give the band bad publicity. It is also important for me to bear in mind that the logo must be effective aesthetically, incorporate some conventions, include a bold typography that clearly signifies they are a rock band, and the logo must be of a size that means it will easily fot within the confines/dimensions of profile pictures on social media - as this is now how bands go about promoting their music. It is famously documented that Arctic Monkeys promoted the entirety of their music through the use of MySpace, through fans sharing their music online rather than the band promoting it, which is why aspects of promoting the band on social media should not be overlooked.

These are the provisional designs for my logos, I feel I have designed them in a way that makes them reflective of the band (taking into account their brand image and the music itself). This is why I have chosen to place the band name in clear, bold and simple typography across the head stock of a Gibson Les Paul guitar - this form of iconography works well is it is reminiscent of the type of image Guns N Roses represented. It also happens to be the model of guitar played by the lead guitarist of the band which would find favour with the artist, but it also signifies that the band are a hard rock band as it is clear through the logo that they utilise such instruments to create their music. This makes the logo incisive, almost concise - it expresses the essential features of the band through one logo which will give them identity. 

In terms of semiotics, this logo seeks to reach its audience through the use of iconography as it is essentially an icon: it bears a real picture of a guitar that has been adapted to display the band's name. This is why I chose to use a guitar for the band's logo - I wanted to make use of iconography in the band's work and therefore I have used something real (qualifying it as an icon) but edited it to make it slightly more abstract. This logo will probably find favour with a niche audience who play guitar themselves and so will recognise the importance of the logo and it's suitability which will entice them immediately if they enjoy hard rock/indie rock music i.e. this logo would bear significant discrepancies if it was used to represent/promote an R'n'B artist.Therefore, it is immediately decoded and given meaning by those who recognise what it is.

This logo is a variation on the first one, it is slightly more detailed, however it compromises boldness and size of the typography which could make it easy to be overlooked and difficult to decipher the name of the band on posters/adverts/digipaks etc. This is why I will probably not opt for this logo to promote my ancillary texts as it does not have enough of an impact and it is not clear enough that it is a band logo it looks more like an image with not enough meaning - this is why I am either going to opt for a good aesthetically pleasing typography or use the first 

First Draft of Digipak

This is the first draft of my digipak. Despite the fact that it features locations that feature in my video the digipak as a whole as lots of room for improvements. For a start, there are clear discrepancies between the first draft of my video and the first draft of my digipak - this is not a binary opposition in anyway, this is just a poor first attempt at a digipak whilst becoming accustomed to software (Adobe Photoshop CS3) and also a lack of album cover research has led me to make a fairly lax, uninformed first draft of my digipak. The front of my digipak features a very bare, and meaningless picture accompanied by a typography that is incredibly basic and no logo. I felt at the time that putting pictures of locations with the omission of the protagonist would create ambiguity, however it just makes the digipak seem irrelevant in comparison to the video - this is a point that my teacher alluded to: just as there must be continuity in the video itself, there must be an element of continuity in the video and the ancillary texts produced with it - like many products, they must match in some way in order to be identified as the same brand. This is the most important improvement I need to make to my digipak, I need more relevant photos (featuring the protagonist) and these need to be adapted on Photoshop CS3 so that there is a monochrome effect applied to the photos to match my video and overall desire to achieve that raw undisguised 'indie' effect in my work. I also intend to put other effects on the cover of my digipak however I am undecided as to what at this point.

It is also notable that the back cover looks out of place and should not be featured on the album cover, since this shot never actually features at any point in my video it was merely me trying to be adventurous with the cover, however, as I have found out in my research, minimalism is the key to creating effective artwork on a digipak for bands of my style (indie rock/hard rock). Therein, I will be making a plethora of changes to my digipak.

Another thing that I need to include which I have not done are track listings on the back cover of the digipak - this is a key component to the digipak as when potential consumers pick up an album and ponder over buying it, they will instinctively flip the album over and analyse the back of the album to see other songs that will feature on the album and also examine the artwork featured on the back cover. In essence, I would say that the digipak has no definitive meaning and it does not give the band an identity by which they can be recognised. This has lead to a change in my planning, I realise now that I should develop an appropriate logo to help construct a brand identity and open up further marketing oppurtunitites for the artist.

The changes should be as follows:

- Take new photos featuring the protagonist
- Use a monochrome effect on the photos and adapt contrast to suit
- Feature track listings on the back of the digipak including all other songs that the artist intends for the album
- Use more fitting typography to suit the artist
- Develop an appropriate logo to accompany this typography and gain the band recognition also using semiotics.

First Cut/First Shoot

The shots in the video are the result of my first shoot and are an incredibly vague insight into how my video will end up - I still need to take into consideration narrative theories and adaptations such as colour correct and lighting in order for the video to be completely finished and seen as a marketable product that will represent the band's brand identity in a positive way.

This is the (unfinished) first draft of my video and upon review it is clear that it needs a significant amount of changes in order for it to gain top marks and give the artist any credibility. The video is unfinished and so needs enough footage to fill the entire song, this is probably the first problem that needs to be addressed. Secondly, in certain parts of the video (notably 00:40 - 01:20) the video clearly lacks continuity as a result of lax directing and poor editing - these are problems that will have to be rectified in my second shoot.

It is also apparent that many of my shots are very prolonged which is a direct result of poor editing - I should have cut these to make them shorter so that I could intercut with a plethora of other shots to keep the video interesting, as upon feedback from my teacher I found out that despite the fact the footage fit well in time with the music (cutting took place in time with the guitar riffs and the drum loops) the video dragged on and was quite slow and predictable which made it boring to watch. My teacher, however, did comment on how he liked the mise en scene (locations and the way the girl is presented as isolated through the fields) and also the props such as the coat she wears - which as I said I wanted to use to make the video somewhat comparable (analogous) to "The A Team" by Ed Sheeran. It was also brought to my attention that when the typography is displayed on the screen during the opening sequence (reading "The Fight by The Case: Edited, Directed and Produced by Joe Grogan") it should be displayed in the same typography as the typography used on the digipak and magazine poster/advert to make the video more authentic.

My main priority is collating enough footage on premier to be able to fill the song - my teacher said (as I suspected) is better to have surplus footage than a lack of footage as it gives me more creative freedom if I have more footage to work with. We decided it would be a good idea to film the subject scrunching the note (which she is seen reading at 00:15 seconds onwards) and throwing it in anger using a combination of ECUs close-ups and mid shots (I pondered the idea of a canted angle) to work concurrently with when the song culminates - when the guitars get louder and become more distorted and the vocals become more aggressive. My teacher also informed me that I may need to use Premier Pro software or After Effects in order to tweak the lighting in some scenes as at times the lighting of the video makes the video appear dull.